When looking at some of the other reviews, I found myself needing to write one myself.
This flash DOES deserve front page for many reasons... the original concept and design creativity is amazing. The "wood" snow flow is a great idea, especially when the drawings in the layers were erased in certain areas to show the kid picking the "snow" up and throwing it against the apple.
Technique is good too. Camera angle changed often providing the flash with a clean effect, and the silhouette of the birds, tree, etc. was done nicely. Not to mention that coloring, shading, and motion effects are spectacular. Audio fit well.
Write good reviews.
Great job on the soldier guy. It was all frame-by-frame.
Really short becuase it was a looping flash. I like the title! (But not eating it.)
The music is the best.
Good spriting. The only bad thing really was when it was zooming in on Yoshi.
Long enough... but I didn't really understand it.
Good sound. The Birdo and the pole music got annoying though.
I think it might have been funnier if I understood it.
Good job. But I've seen another one of your flashes and it was almost exactly the same.
Work on your length and variety.
Pole music? Violence none? Zooming? I think you wrote this review for another yoshi flash because this doesnt makes any friggin sense.
Pretty good graphics... except that the guys arms are too short.
Pretty short. But not TOO short.
I don't count play buttons.
More humor than another one of your flashes I've seen.
I agree with you on the AOL thing. I don't hate AOL, but I don't really like it too much.
Work on making your arms look more "arm-ish". Also, work on your length.
Hi E19 yes these are my first flashes and these were the days when I couldnt draw. But you preach and you say all this but can you do any better? For your first flashes? I think not. Publish some content and we will see how you fair.
Holy crap! Those are great graphics! They're flawless from what I can see.
Kind of fair length. But it started the animations over half way through.
I like that song!
Kind of funny... but not really.
Perfect graphics! Congrats!
Work on your humor. (Even though you couldn't in this flash)
The graphics were okay drawings I guess. But they just... weren't okay drawings...
Not too short, not that long. There are a lotta Mario Raps out there though.
Music was clear enough.
Kind of lacking. But it's not bad enough to be blammed.
Work on your drawings and originality.
Read author's comments next time.
Good drawings, some things need a little work though.
Kind of short... but it's a trailer... and it's on my rules that I shouldn't blam trailers too often becuase... okay whatever.
Just the Linkin Park music really.
One becuase it didn't show much of it.
The guy falling off the boat and the drug dealers were pretty funny. Make the Titanic flash part comedy.
It's a trailer... so I didn't blam it... but trailers are always close.
Try not to use those 3-D effects too much... they don't go well with the rest of the flash. Also, work on your people a little bit.
Great drawings with multiple angles. Your drawing weakness is drawing people with their shoulder facing the screen.
Long enough. Original enough.
Good music, but no voices. I know voices are hard, but try to get voices somehow. Don't use that robotic voice though. Also, I liked how even though there weren't any voices, the mouths still moved.
A little blood.
Congrats on not getting blammed.
Keep making flash and don't quit! You have potential that can be extended much further.
Great graphics. And I'm not one of those dumb people who think that you draw bad becuase drew something bad on purpose. Anymore.
Long enough. I though it was ging to be longer though.
Very clear music. I liked how it took up every part of the flash that it could.
The restating of Irving being socially awquard or whatever.
Really good. But I thought it would be better becuase of the intro. Good it was, the intro!
Ummm... stay in school. I don't know.
I didn't blam you JUST becuase of your graphics...
Really short... really weird. Weird is good though.
What did that guy say at the end?
I don't consider squashed ants violent.
I think it could have been a little funny if I knew what the guy said at the end...
Work on your theme and length... and sound too.
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