Best: Graphics
Graphics-6
Good spriting. The only bad thing really was when it was zooming in on Yoshi.
Style-5
Long enough... but I didn't really understand it.
Sound-4
Good sound. The Birdo and the pole music got annoying though.
Violence-0
None.
Interactivity-1
The frog.
Humor-1
I think it might have been funnier if I understood it.
Overall-4
Good job. But I've seen another one of your flashes and it was almost exactly the same.
Advice-x
Work on your length and variety.
Pole music? Violence none? Zooming? I think you wrote this review for another yoshi flash because this doesnt makes any friggin sense.
Best: Sound
Graphics-5
Pretty good graphics... except that the guys arms are too short.
Style-2
Pretty short. But not TOO short.
Sound-6
Clear voices.
Violence-0
None.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-4
More humor than another one of your flashes I've seen.
Overall-4
I agree with you on the AOL thing. I don't hate AOL, but I don't really like it too much.
Advice-x
Work on making your arms look more "arm-ish". Also, work on your length.
Hi E19 yes these are my first flashes and these were the days when I couldnt draw. But you preach and you say all this but can you do any better? For your first flashes? I think not. Publish some content and we will see how you fair.
Best: Graphics
Graphics-5
The graphics were okay drawings I guess. But they just... weren't okay drawings...
Style-3
Not too short, not that long. There are a lotta Mario Raps out there though.
Sound-4
Music was clear enough.
Violence-0
None.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-0
None.
Overall-3
Kind of lacking. But it's not bad enough to be blammed.
Advice-x
Work on your drawings and originality.
Read author's comments next time.
Best: Graphics, sound, humor, and overall
Graphics-3
Good drawings... but the animation was messed up in some way.
Style-2
Shorter than the second one. Had less of a story than the second one.
Sound-3
The fighting music wasn't perfectly clear.
Violence-2
Grey blood made this flash have less violence.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-3
The pancake was funny. LIMM! (Laugh in my mind)
Overall-3
Something is screwed up with your animation... what is it???
Advice-x
Work on your animation... somehow...
Do you rhink we should change violence to blood?
Best: Style
Graphics-3
Kind of "circle-like-easy-type".
Style-5
About a minute long. Black and white not really original... but theme is original.
Sound-2
Only music half way through the flash really...
Violence-2
Fighting.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-4
Humor. Weird humor.
Overall-4
Weird theme and okay movement and animation.
Advice-x
Work on your animation.
And now it's my turn:
Graphics i agree on.
Style: Does it really matter weather the movie's long or short? If one movie is really good, but the other movie is long, which would you choose to watch?
And black and white are the most original style you van find, really.
Sound: Well, a movie with music all the time would'nt be that good, would it?
Violence: It's not blood you're rating, remember that!
Interactivity i agree on.
Humor IS wierd!! AND FUN!
Best: Graphics
Graphics-7
Great drwaings... but weird animation...
Style-6
Long enough... again, some things were weird.
Sound-5
Too hard to understand the voices.
Violence-0
None
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-3
I can see where the funny parts are... but to me... they're not very funny.
Overall-4
Pretty good. End was... expected.
Advice-x
Work on your graphic animation.
Graphics: critics who like the drawings? that's rare. i like the way of animating, so im afraid ill keep it this way.
Style:Weird?
Sound:sorry bout that
Violence: depends o how blood thrusty you are, there was a bit of punching around and 4 guys got an heartattack and one blew up, so that's not nothing.
Interactivity:wel it aint a game. plus you forget te " c" part
Humor:sorry about that, everyone it['s taste
Overall:yeah, unbelieveble how many movies end with encredits eh? so predicteble..
Advice:kay
Best: Sound
Graphics-4
Good graphics... but not so much at the beginning.
Style-4
Long enough, but I didn't like how there were drawings and pictures in the same flash. Yeah. That.
Sound-7
Music videos are always pimp. By always I mean sometimes.
Violence-5
Blood.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-0
None. Was there even supposed to be? Only dark humor, if any.
Overall-5
You're lucky. I like flash music videos.
Advice-x
Work on your graphics a bit.
Your review is comprehensive, constructive, and cewl. I shall.
Best: Graphics and sound
Graphics-5
Good I guess. The background underwater was weird.
Style-2
Really short. I liked your play button though.
Sound-5
I didn't notice it too much. I don't know if that's bad or good.
Violence-3
Blood.
Interactivity-2
Buttons at top. But I don't count play buttons.
Humor-1
Well... maybe the first part was kinda funny.
Overall-2
When Mario was walking in the second scene, it was screwed up.
Advice-x
Try working on your story and length.
Thanks for the review. Graphics, sound and humour was the only thing i aimed for. Length and story, that is covered in my new flash trust me. Expect it soon.
Best: Graphics
Graphics-9
Way to go! To me you are the best spriter I've seen so far on Newgrounds! I gues it's becuase of your unique style. And I don't say this all the time. I never have!
Style-8
Again, exeptional spriting.
Sound-7
Good choice of music. It syncs good.
Violence-1
Barely any
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons
Humor-0
None
Overall-7
What game is Claire from? Did you pixel art her yourself?
:D thanks for the constructive review, and no, i didn't sprite claire myself, i think she was from a sonic game. I'm not sure though, sorry. :(
Go short
Good... but you spelled "author" wrong. Try working on the speed. Usually I say to make flashes longer to other people, but this time I think it needs to be shorter.
dont worry...
next will be shorter..
and yes... i am a bit dislectic.. so what...
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